“I’ve used script consultants – some very well known ones, good ones. But none as good as Dave. He did a deep dive on a very complicated script of mine, and found some flaws that others didn’t and better yet – gave me SOLUTIONS that worked! Can’t beat that. Nobody can.”
Parker C. (Comedy Feature)
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“Dave’s analysis was spot on! 11 pages of notes and suggestions, (on a 30 page script) It was clear that he spent a tremendous amount of time and effort on the analysis and I definitely will be implementing his suggestions. I was particularly pleased with his notes about one of my characters and see a tremendous increase in value to the script overall with the suggestions he made.”
Katie C. (1/2 hr. Comedy Pilot)
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“Dave peppers his analysis with ‘considerations’ to offer, which embodies his approach. He provides thoughtful comments, and recognizes and respects the creative voice. Dave’s multifaceted professional experience in the industry is reason enough to want to hear what he has to say, but his earnest drive to hone your script with practical notes is why you listen.”
Nicolas J (Horror-Thriller Feature)
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“When I got Dave’s notes back, I was blown away. They were the best I’ve received in my 25+ year filmmaking career. They were thoughtful, insightful and actionable. He’s worth every penny and more.”
Marlene R. (Dramatic Dance Feature)
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“Dave provided some of the most thorough notes I’ve ever received. It was great to see my strong points but equally important to see where I needed help. His twelve page analysis of my 105 page script was broken down into sections as he focused deeply on the Characters and their relationships, Dialogue, Story Execution, Structure and Marketability. All along the way providing excellent insight and suggestions on how to make it better and stronger. I can now see my script in a whole new light and can’t wait to make these important changes for a strong outcome.”
Margina S. (Family Adventure Feature)
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“Dave goes into much more depth than other script analysts. He’ll dissect your plot and characters until you can feel the blood, sweat and tears. You may not agree with everything he says, but he’ll give you plenty to think about.”
Rob S. (Detective Drama Feature)